political help please

[ausjack]

Hey team,

I was just wondering if anyone here could please help me do up an email or proof read one for me to send to my local member about my fear and disappointment with the government and what they are doing to DSP, thank you very much in advance and please email if you could help, xx

[Goldseeker]

Rather than have someone proof read your letter/document, send it as you yourself have drafted it.   It is your letter, your submission, your document.

(Please, no disrespect to your intelligence etc implied).

[robbiegal]

now I think they are calling for public submissions about the proposed changes
if I find any info I will let you know

[ausjack]

All good GS, it's just that I'm not very PC and I know I'll just tell them where to go and know that won't do any good and yes please if you can find anything out would be most appreciated RG :friends:

[Coiny Chris]

Hello,

Have a trusted friend Proof read it just to eliminate Typo's It will mean more being your words, especially if any questions are asked. Even a print out of your Depression thread could be worth including. Remember, it is not something to target you, the scammers are the ones they want.

[robbiegal]

probably no help ... but
https://www.ombo.nsw.gov.au/training-workshops-and-events/our-workshops/community-and-disability-services-training/the-rights-stuff-tips-for-solving-problems-and-making-complaints

http://www.aph.gov.au/about_parliament/parliamentary_departments/parliamentary_library/pubs/rp/budgetreview201415/dsp

http://www.comlaw.gov.au/Details/F2011L02716

ps I am happy to help
I write letters a bit (in my work) and to my surprise, very often get results!!

[Ozcoins]

I think the best advice I can give is:
Work out what result you want your letter to get.
Then make sure what you write will have the best chance of getting that result from the person reading it.

[bellyflorin]

AJ  just put in parcel with a ticking clock  they will take notice :angel: oops only joking  :police_car:

[robbiegal]

norti belly boy